six word story no. 32

 

rains soften our stiff, angry limbs.

art by madeline kloepper

 

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writing is the teeth that gnaw on my bones.

4 comments

  1. I love how the word “rains” blends into “soften”, reflecting precisely what it’s doing, and how the comma does the same thing, stiffening the line. Nice.

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  2. Great picture! it can also stiffen our angry joints!

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